I write at fanfiction and since not everyone has an account I thought to share my work. It's an atempt at writing after being degraded over 5 times. So please enjoy.
Syaoran and Sakura were in their secret garden. The sun was just setting in along the desert. “It’s been so long that we’ve come here together, ne? Syaoran?” Princess Sakura asked.
Syaoran nodded “You’re right hime.” Sakura gazed out as the sky was painted brilliant hues of orange, pink, and purple. The brunette man took out a box and exhaled. He settled next to Sakura. He shifted nervously “Ano…hime, what are you feelings towards me?”
“Eh?” the princess asked, confused. Then she smiled as her emerald eyes met his amber ones. “I’ve already told you that I love you, Syaoran-kun” she replied. Then she questioned “Why are asking this now?”
“Because,” he grabbed the auburn-haired woman’s hands. Syaoran dropped to one knee and kissed her hand. “I wanted to ask you this question” his hand went to his pocket. A small blue box emerged from Syaoran’s pants pocket. The man opened the box to reveal a silver band and in the middle was a sakura with an emerald in the flower. “Would you marry me?”
Sakura gasped at Syaoran’s proposal. The next second Syaoran was on the ground with Sakura on top of him. “Yes!” she squealed. Sakura leaned towards Syaoran. Her lips brushed against Syaoran’s and they kissed. When they broke away both smiled. “I am so happy Syaoran-kun! I can’t wait to tell Touya!” Sakura exclaimed.
(Palace)
The palace was calm with the bustle of the servants around the elegant hallways. The sound of one servant’s walking was heard through the lonely corridor. She had long bluish-black hair and grey eyes and was garbed in pants and a shirt. Her pace was steady as she juggled the tray of food and documents for the king. The servant girl stopped at the pair of gargantuan white and gold doors that led to the throne room.
“Ohayo gozaimasu Touya-o-” She greeted before she realized that the princess along with her ‘crush’, Syaoran was there. The woman quietly moved to deliver the food and papers to Touya’s side. “Touya-nii-sama Syaoran-kun proposed to me.” Sakura told her older brother.
‘Oh that is so good for you Sakura,’ the servant thought. Her grey eyes trailed to the face of the ruler of Clow Country. She mused ‘however, I don’t think Touya agrees. I’m not surprised that he hasn’t-’
“ABSOLUTELY NOT! NEVER! NOT GONNA HAPPEN! I FORBID IT!” Touya hollered. “I DON’T CARE IF SAVE YOU FROM THE REED TEME I WILL NEVER LET YOU GET MARRIED TO HIM!”
Although the woman knew that Touya would be pissed the sudden explosion made her jump and drop the items she carried. ‘Ka-boom!’ she thought triumphantly as she picked up pieces of the dishes that were broken. The servant knew that he was hot-headed but she knew that the princess was…unpleasant when matters concerned the man next to her.
“Yes I will! I’m not a child anymore Touya!” Sakura screamed back at him. “Syaoran saved me and I love him! If you still don’t approve of him that’s your problem!”
“You forget Sakura I’m still king of Clow Country and I could order the gaki’s banishment from this country.” Touya argued calmly. Sakura looked ready to take this debate further. Before she could open her mouth the door opened again. Yukito stood in the doorway. The room became silent.
He looked at the young woman gathering the porcelain on the floor. ‘What happened?’ Yukito mouthed to her.
‘Explain later. Get them out of here’ she mouthed in response.
Yukito cleared his throat. “Excuse my intrusion Touya-ou,” e apologized. Yukito could feel the killer intent from both siblings. “But Sakura-hime and Syaoran-kun have friends here to visit them.”
Syaoran took Sakura’s arm. “C’mon hime.” He coaxed. “We’ll finish this later.” Sakura grudgingly followed Syaoran and Yukito out the room.
Slow start I know but I’m easing in I guess. As for the servant I mentioned she’s a key in this so just wait and her name will be revealed, okay?
Syaoran and Sakura were in their secret garden. The sun was just setting in along the desert. “It’s been so long that we’ve come here together, ne? Syaoran?” Princess Sakura asked.
Syaoran nodded “You’re right hime.” Sakura gazed out as the sky was painted brilliant hues of orange, pink, and purple. The brunette man took out a box and exhaled. He settled next to Sakura. He shifted nervously “Ano…hime, what are you feelings towards me?”
“Eh?” the princess asked, confused. Then she smiled as her emerald eyes met his amber ones. “I’ve already told you that I love you, Syaoran-kun” she replied. Then she questioned “Why are asking this now?”
“Because,” he grabbed the auburn-haired woman’s hands. Syaoran dropped to one knee and kissed her hand. “I wanted to ask you this question” his hand went to his pocket. A small blue box emerged from Syaoran’s pants pocket. The man opened the box to reveal a silver band and in the middle was a sakura with an emerald in the flower. “Would you marry me?”
Sakura gasped at Syaoran’s proposal. The next second Syaoran was on the ground with Sakura on top of him. “Yes!” she squealed. Sakura leaned towards Syaoran. Her lips brushed against Syaoran’s and they kissed. When they broke away both smiled. “I am so happy Syaoran-kun! I can’t wait to tell Touya!” Sakura exclaimed.
(Palace)
The palace was calm with the bustle of the servants around the elegant hallways. The sound of one servant’s walking was heard through the lonely corridor. She had long bluish-black hair and grey eyes and was garbed in pants and a shirt. Her pace was steady as she juggled the tray of food and documents for the king. The servant girl stopped at the pair of gargantuan white and gold doors that led to the throne room.
“Ohayo gozaimasu Touya-o-” She greeted before she realized that the princess along with her ‘crush’, Syaoran was there. The woman quietly moved to deliver the food and papers to Touya’s side. “Touya-nii-sama Syaoran-kun proposed to me.” Sakura told her older brother.
‘Oh that is so good for you Sakura,’ the servant thought. Her grey eyes trailed to the face of the ruler of Clow Country. She mused ‘however, I don’t think Touya agrees. I’m not surprised that he hasn’t-’
“ABSOLUTELY NOT! NEVER! NOT GONNA HAPPEN! I FORBID IT!” Touya hollered. “I DON’T CARE IF SAVE YOU FROM THE REED TEME I WILL NEVER LET YOU GET MARRIED TO HIM!”
Although the woman knew that Touya would be pissed the sudden explosion made her jump and drop the items she carried. ‘Ka-boom!’ she thought triumphantly as she picked up pieces of the dishes that were broken. The servant knew that he was hot-headed but she knew that the princess was…unpleasant when matters concerned the man next to her.
“Yes I will! I’m not a child anymore Touya!” Sakura screamed back at him. “Syaoran saved me and I love him! If you still don’t approve of him that’s your problem!”
“You forget Sakura I’m still king of Clow Country and I could order the gaki’s banishment from this country.” Touya argued calmly. Sakura looked ready to take this debate further. Before she could open her mouth the door opened again. Yukito stood in the doorway. The room became silent.
He looked at the young woman gathering the porcelain on the floor. ‘What happened?’ Yukito mouthed to her.
‘Explain later. Get them out of here’ she mouthed in response.
Yukito cleared his throat. “Excuse my intrusion Touya-ou,” e apologized. Yukito could feel the killer intent from both siblings. “But Sakura-hime and Syaoran-kun have friends here to visit them.”
Syaoran took Sakura’s arm. “C’mon hime.” He coaxed. “We’ll finish this later.” Sakura grudgingly followed Syaoran and Yukito out the room.
Slow start I know but I’m easing in I guess. As for the servant I mentioned she’s a key in this so just wait and her name will be revealed, okay?
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